KVR Audio

Paulieworld · Post by **Paulieworld** » Sat Mar 30, 2024 8:30 pm

Created on an iPad with Cubasis, an Apple Pencil, a pair of decent headphones, and a few common apps. Any thoughts?

https://soundcloud.com/paulieworld/airing-of-grievances

tonedef71 · Post by **tonedef71** » Sun Mar 31, 2024 3:18 am

I think you've got something here. In my humble opinion, some of the parts (such as the arpeggiated bit) could benefit from more separation in the mix, as I think they could add more interest to the track than simply blending into the background texture.

Paulieworld · Post by **Paulieworld** » Sun Mar 31, 2024 11:30 am

tonedef71 wrote: ↑Sun Mar 31, 2024 3:18 am I think you've got something here. In my humble opinion, some of the parts (such as the arpeggiated bit) could benefit from more separation in the mix, as I think they could add more interest to the track than simply blending into the background texture.

Thank you for the feedback. Much appreciated. I have quite a bit of material on SoundCloud and I am thinking about compiling it into albums. I joined this forum because the members often provide constructive criticism. I am always curious to know what others think, and how I can improve. I will give this another listen with your suggestions in mind. Thank you for listening!

WayneD123 · Post by **WayneD123** » Thu Apr 04, 2024 8:16 pm

Wow this one goes full in your face; it's heavy.

Paulieworld · Post by **Paulieworld** » Thu Apr 04, 2024 11:00 pm

WayneD123 wrote: ↑Thu Apr 04, 2024 8:16 pm Wow this one goes full in your face; it's heavy.

Yeah, I try to do something different every time. This was inspired by an episode of Seinfeld. Festivus! And by Vyvyan from The Young Ones.

Hey, are you the jazz guy? I hope you get going on SoundCloud. There are plenty of people who would dig your music. Have a good one!

Airing Of Grievances