I want you
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 2773 posts since 5 Jun, 2011 from Preston, England, UK
https://soundcloud.com/jethrobull/i-want-you
Just a little one for the weekend....
Thanks for listening.
Just a little one for the weekend....
Thanks for listening.
The inner workings of vurts mind are a force to be reckoned with.
music is a need in my life...yes I could survive without it but tbh I dont know how
myfeebleeffort
https://paulroach2.bandcamp.com/
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/
music is a need in my life...yes I could survive without it but tbh I dont know how
myfeebleeffort
https://paulroach2.bandcamp.com/
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/
- KVRAF
- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
My Feedback
Music - 10
Instruments - 9
Performance - 9
Mix - 10
Overall - 9.5
Comments: Absolutely love the music of this one. Would love to see a video tutorial on how this one was made and mixed.
Music - 10
Instruments - 9
Performance - 9
Mix - 10
Overall - 9.5
Comments: Absolutely love the music of this one. Would love to see a video tutorial on how this one was made and mixed.
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- KVRist
- 45 posts since 7 Jul, 2016
This was nice!
One thing that I felt; and this is my opinion not by any standards the correct one:
The vocals were drown by the synth playing the melody and I would've liked to hear the vocals more clearly. I understand that the vocals aren't the main melody but just some carving in the EQ on the synth could've accomplished what I mean I think
Other than that, good mix! The drums are at a nice level and everything else is super tidy for a relatively ambient mix. Good job!
Certainly much better than me in any case
One thing that I felt; and this is my opinion not by any standards the correct one:
The vocals were drown by the synth playing the melody and I would've liked to hear the vocals more clearly. I understand that the vocals aren't the main melody but just some carving in the EQ on the synth could've accomplished what I mean I think
Other than that, good mix! The drums are at a nice level and everything else is super tidy for a relatively ambient mix. Good job!
Certainly much better than me in any case
- KVRAF
- 3205 posts since 28 Aug, 2012 from Melbourne, Australia
Enjoyed this Bully! The evolving/sweeping distorted synth is cool.
Nice mix use of instruments...
Well done!
Nice mix use of instruments...
Well done!
Bandcamp
Music with progressive intent.
Music with progressive intent.
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- KVRist
- 259 posts since 19 Oct, 2014
Nice. Very peaceful track. I enjoyed it, especially the 2nd part.
- KVRAF
- 6326 posts since 18 Jul, 2008 from New York
This has pop potential. It starts off great but instead of developing you kept adding more layers until it got busy. Maybe write more sections with different chords? BTW, I think the snare is too loud.
- KVRAF
- 1994 posts since 19 Aug, 2008
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 2773 posts since 5 Jun, 2011 from Preston, England, UK
Thank you everyone for your comments and feedback. I really appreciate it!
The inner workings of vurts mind are a force to be reckoned with.
music is a need in my life...yes I could survive without it but tbh I dont know how
myfeebleeffort
https://paulroach2.bandcamp.com/
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/
music is a need in my life...yes I could survive without it but tbh I dont know how
myfeebleeffort
https://paulroach2.bandcamp.com/
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/
- KVRAF
- 5540 posts since 5 Aug, 2006 from UK - The Mudway Towns
... and another
It wasn't me! (well, actually, it probably was) - apparently now an 'elderly' so maybe I forgot!
- KVRAF
- 11522 posts since 13 Mar, 2009 from UK
Very pleasant listen, jb. It's got quite a cheerful vibe. I wouldn't mind the vox. being just a little more upfront. You could use an EQ cut to achieve that, but a relative volume increase (a couple of dB) in the mix would probably suffice if you have the headroom to do that.
Good work
Good work