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https://soundcloud.com/jethrobull/i-want-you

Just a little one for the weekend.... :hihi:

Thanks for listening.
The inner workings of vurts mind are a force to be reckoned with.
music is a need in my life...yes I could survive without it but tbh I dont know how
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https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/

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Music - 10
Instruments - 9
Performance - 9
Mix - 10

Overall - 9.5

Comments: Absolutely love the music of this one. Would love to see a video tutorial on how this one was made and mixed.

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This was nice!

One thing that I felt; and this is my opinion not by any standards the correct one:

The vocals were drown by the synth playing the melody and I would've liked to hear the vocals more clearly. I understand that the vocals aren't the main melody but just some carving in the EQ on the synth could've accomplished what I mean I think :)

Other than that, good mix! The drums are at a nice level and everything else is super tidy for a relatively ambient mix. Good job!

Certainly much better than me in any case :)

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Enjoyed this Bully! The evolving/sweeping distorted synth is cool.
Nice mix use of instruments...
Well done!
:)
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Nice. Very peaceful track. I enjoyed it, especially the 2nd part.

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I have to say, was a bit disappointed, after expecting the Lennon cover, as a synth arr.

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This has pop potential. It starts off great but instead of developing you kept adding more layers until it got busy. Maybe write more sections with different chords? BTW, I think the snare is too loud.

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like it

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Thank you everyone for your comments and feedback. I really appreciate it! :tu:
The inner workings of vurts mind are a force to be reckoned with.
music is a need in my life...yes I could survive without it but tbh I dont know how
myfeebleeffort
https://paulroach2.bandcamp.com/
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/

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... and another :tu:
:)
It wasn't me! (well, actually, it probably was) - apparently now an 'elderly' so maybe I forgot!

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Very pleasant listen, jb. It's got quite a cheerful vibe. I wouldn't mind the vox. being just a little more upfront. You could use an EQ cut to achieve that, but a relative volume increase (a couple of dB) in the mix would probably suffice if you have the headroom to do that.

Good work :)

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