Rock Ballad Song by me with my VOCALS - My Sweet Lady

[Gabriel_West]

Only 1st Vers and 1st Chorus of my old 2003 Rock Ballad Song "My Sweet Lady"
Do you think, its worth working on it again more deeper? Well, its still unfinished, but at least it finally came surprisingly close to the "composing moment-version" of my remembrance, which still exists partially in my mind, unfortunately, I don't have any 2003-live-recording anymore and cannot sing like in 2003 anymore 'snif'.
Definitely will work on it soon, to make the song more complete. Lyrics are partially incomplete too, yet. Any feedback-impressions are very much appreciated. kind regards, Gabe West of germany
https://soundcloud.com/user-926227779/my-sweet-lady

[Bansaw]

Nice melody and vibe. But vocals are pushed right back with the reverb, and the whole thing could be mixed better.

[The Noodlist]

Cool.
While I'm not very good at mixing, I agree with above.^^^

[jackoo]

Love the melodies; the track is relaxing; vocals are warm and musical.
Agreeing that the vocals need to be pushed in front. In some parts, I feel that the instrumentation is too sparse, while at other moments it is fighting the vocals (the piano is sometimes too up in front).
Enjoyable listen! Good work!
Definitely deserves be developed further in my eyes.

[jackoo]

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[Gabriel_West]

Thx for your feedback, dear @Bansaw, @The Noodlist and @Jackoo, really apreciate it.