Sea of Peace(Chilled out)
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 114 posts since 27 Apr, 2021
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- KVRist
- 490 posts since 16 Aug, 2002 from Ontario. Canada
Ask yourself why, after 30 seconds, we have to listen to 30 seconds of badly played single notes before you get into something else? Keep plugging away at it. You've got a ways to go yet.
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- KVRian
- 555 posts since 16 Dec, 2003
I found your melodies interesting and when you get a couple of overlapping lines going together the result can be engaging. It’s pretty spare and, to my ears could use some more fleshing out with additional layers. As burkek says, keep at it.
